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How Dare you suck out the strength in my limbs?
How Dare you distract me in lectures with a look,
A flicker of interest?
How Dare you smile knowingly at me, as broadly
As the ocean?
How Dare you know I'd do anything for you?
How Dare you wring my heart in my chest ruthlessly,
And make my cheeks burn?
How Dare you call my name, your tongue tethering to it
As if it were your own?

How Dare you?

How Dare you entice my ears with your jokes, your laugh? "You get to hear my
Droning voce," you say as you glance my way.
How Dare you twist my emotions into a salad of anxiety
And anticipation?
How Dare you holster down that which is savage
And free?

How Dare you?

No.
I don't need you.
No.
Your voice rings mute in my ears.
No.
I am not hypnotized by your cerulean gaze.

I am my own creature,
I do not yearn for your consent,
I am my own creature,
I don't desire your praise.

So, How Dare you?

How Dare you invade my mind, coiling
In every dream, every thought?
How dare you spur my lungs into failure,
Just like the 2008 Collapse?

I despise your ability to stimulate my breathing,
Your ability to garble away at my words.

How Dare You?

I don't need your tresses between my
Fingers. Curling around their tips,
I don't need your warmth against my cheek
On the nights freezing over my heart.

I don't.
I don't.

I say no.
No wine, women and snuff for you.
How Dare You Mister Keats?
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Ah yes, we've all had these moments. Inspired by my own rambling thoughts as I walked out of an unspecific class after an unspecific conversation with an unspecific person.

Here you go, my thoughts on this irritating matter in the wonderful form of poetry :3
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Mood: Affection ~ShortySilly16 Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was nice, at first I was under the impression of the character lying to themselves, midway I could see that they really where trying not to let this person in, perhaps because they knew the person was nothing but venom and they should know better, and at the end I really could feel they where serious about pulling it off. Also the last two lines brought up some interesting wonderings, lol. I won't ask you though, haha!
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Mood: Cheerful ~RancidToxicity Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Good deduction on the poem (: You caught several things that hit the mark. The person itself is not venom, but definitely not one meant for the person. As for the end I just couldn't stop thinking of Keats' poem "Wine, Women, and Snuff" it's actually quite an interesting one he wrote.

Thank you for the comment! ^^
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Mood: Amazed ~ShortySilly16 Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn I'm good
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I really like this poem. Your word choice is great!
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Mood: Joy ~RancidToxicity Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! It took a small while of editing, but I really like how it turned out.
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